Comments on: Part III: Did You Make the Connection? http://unconditionalconfidence.com/blog/2006/07/22/part-iii-did-you-make-the-connection/ Sat, 06 Sep 2008 02:47:34 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6 By: Nancy Tierney http://unconditionalconfidence.com/blog/2006/07/22/part-iii-did-you-make-the-connection/#comment-34 Nancy Tierney Thu, 27 Jul 2006 02:08:02 +0000 http://unconditionalconfidence.com/?p=26#comment-34 Ooo! I like them both. My suggestion would be to put more of the benefit in that statement. What do these "get" by breaking out of the box and rocking? What's going to happen when they start to trust the power of who they are? Do you know what I'm saying? Your statements ARE inspiring, but they are still a little focused on the process rather than the result. Just a little. You're almost there! Keep going! Ooo! I like them both.
My suggestion would be to put more of the benefit in that statement. What do these “get” by breaking out of the box and rocking? What’s going to happen when they start to trust the power of who they are?

Do you know what I’m saying?

Your statements ARE inspiring, but they are still a little focused on the process rather than the result. Just a little.

You’re almost there! Keep going!

]]> By: Tuck (The Rebel Belle) http://unconditionalconfidence.com/blog/2006/07/22/part-iii-did-you-make-the-connection/#comment-33 Tuck (The Rebel Belle) Thu, 27 Jul 2006 01:15:38 +0000 http://unconditionalconfidence.com/?p=26#comment-33 Hey Nancy..thanks so much for visiting my new blog!! I've been practicing..here are my 1st two responses: "I inspire boomer women to own and trust the power of who they are and embrace freedom of self expression with purpose, passion and play!" and "I inspire boomer women to break out of the box and rock!" What do ya think? Hey Nancy..thanks so much for visiting my new blog!! I’ve been practicing..here are my 1st two responses:
“I inspire boomer women to own and trust the power of who they are and embrace freedom of self expression with purpose, passion and play!” and “I inspire boomer women to break out of the box and rock!” What do ya think?

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